The challenge this week was to use synonyms for “open” and “close”. I may have only implied open, but hopefully that is acceptable.
How long did I stare At the shut door of my dreams Before I just pushed?
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Mark Bozeman 
This is beautiful and encouraging!
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This is a lovely senryu. Doors of dreams have to be pushed! 😊
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Overcoming that barrier is difficult but it can make all of the difference. Nice one, Boz.
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I think we’ve all been there. (K)
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Brilliant, Boz. Love it!
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That speaks the truth. Don’t we all do that before we get going with our dreams? Thanks for sharing 🙂
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