For this weeks #tankatuesday, I reflected on a flurry that was spinning in the air as I took Anna out for our little walk before bed. I love these small hints of winter, and snow’s crystal nature and dancing ways always fascinate me.
I don’t know about you, but I would take snow over cold rain any day.
The brief snowflakes swirl In a dance of becoming That changes to rain
If you like my poems, I hope you’ll check out my new book Self of Steam. Many of the poems, such as the title verse, are based on mistakes my students made in their writing that suggested poetic images to me. I would love for you to give it a try.
At this time of year, snow def has my vote.
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I’m with you Mark… snowflakes always look better to me than cold, wintery rainfall. I like the snowflake dance of becoming something more. Very nice imagery.
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You really captured them, Mark! Well written 🙂
Much love,
David
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Lovely, Mark. The imagery is beautiful — ‘dance of becoming.’
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