Back for a challenge

The form below is called a Renga. The breaks show the different line requirements and syllable counts. More info can be found at tankatuesday.com.

Contrast the hint of 
flowers with the attack of
weeds. Balance of Spring.

Hints of summer in sunlight
humidity, light and heat.

Then cool like the fall.
Leaves hush instead of rustle,
No hint of winter
Once bare trees are blossoming
Nature's first green is golden.

One thought on “Back for a challenge

  1. OK… so here’s the instructions: Here’s my hokku:

    an empty attic
    the sound of April showers
    thunderous rumblings

    Now, you write the next two 7 syllable lines

    THEN, you write a new hokku

    I’ll add the two 7 syllable lines to your hokku in the comments of your post. 🙌

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