Trying the poetry challenge from Colleen M. Chesebro
A Senryu is essentially a Haiku, but instead of being about Nature it is about human nature.
I fixate on you As if you are in the room Instead of my phone
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Boz Bozeman 
Yes! This is perfect… a fabulous senryu, in my opinion. I hope you jump into #TankaTuesday every Tuesday. 💛
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Thank you!!
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I definitely will try to do this weekly!
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You’re so welcome.
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very very clever, Mark ~ I like this one!
❤
David
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This is a great poem, Mark! Your middle line really shows where the emotion lies. 🙂
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks
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