I forgot that I need a syllabic poem for the weekly challenge. So here is the image again and my poem.

Look above me now At the love that used to be Dissolving to mist
You have until Tuesday to complete the challenge here.
I forgot that I need a syllabic poem for the weekly challenge. So here is the image again and my poem.
Look above me now At the love that used to be Dissolving to mist
You have until Tuesday to complete the challenge here.
Interesting… this reads like a premonition of the death of her love. This is another take I didn’t see before. Well done.
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That sounds so sad, Mark! Way to catch an emotion!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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It seems as if the melancholy you found might have been prompted in part by the purple shade. Well done.
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Very evocative. (K)
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