The challenge this week is to write a Shadorma, which has a syllable count of 3-5-3-3-7-5. Along with this, the challenge includes random words that must be used in the text.
A smile Sticks onto my lips As the song of new spring Is made up of birds singing The flutter of wings
You can join the challenge here.
And yes I’m saying smile has two syllables. I think it could be argued that it’s one, but I’m saying SMY – UL
Boz Bozeman 
I loved this poem, Mark! The singing of birds does bring a smile to my face.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Creative use of the word stick. I couldn’t figure out how to use it.
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Love this!
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LOL! Smy-ul it is! This is the beauty of shadorma… they always have a lovely rhythm of their own because of the syllable count. Well done!
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Lovely, Mark! ❤
Sincerely,
David
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