The mission this week on TankaTuesday.com is to use 3 kigo words and write three Abhanga, with the syllable count 6-6-6-4.
Sunrise walks with my dog
Are from last week, or the
Weeks ahead. Now I sleep
in: Vacation!
Snow swirls, frost whirls, fire smoke
Twists in winter spirals.
A phrase that sounds like the
Grey days and thoughts.
Picture friends enjoying
Boxing Day in countries
That use "ou" for their
Labour, favours.
Happy New Year for those who celebrate π
Love the seasonal atmosphere. L2&L3 are to rhyme for this form…
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Love how you describe the season. Your last lines made me chuckle. Great poem, Mark!
Yvette M Calleiro π
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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I love the “twists in winter spirals.” Happy New Year!
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Love it – Happy New Year Markπ₯³
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Happy New Year, Mark. The abhanga is a fun form. In the link to the 24 Forms, you will see that L2 and L3 rhyme. It’s really a cool twist! π₯³
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Mark,
Your poem beautifully captures the cozy essence of winter, with vivid imagery and a touch of nostalgia. The contrast between the serene sunrise walks and the wintery scenes paints a delightful picture.
~David
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Very nicely done …..feel sorry for the dog though ππ
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