My haiku for this challenge uses the Kigo words “evergreens” and “bare trees”. I find myself enraptured by what is revealed by the bareness of winter. I especially love how the contour of hills is shown because we can see through the trees. I am caught by the jagged, long peaks that are exposed in this season.
Snow reveals all things:
Burdened evergreens bending
Bare trees branches weave.
Mark, start from: “I find…” and you have an excellent haibun! I love your thoughts and share your sentiments. Your haiku is excellent!
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Love this one Mark 💕
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This is beautiful, Mark! I also love the bare trees against the snowy mountains.
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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I really like the idea of what is revealed by the bare – and so true….. the pattern of the branches and the landscape beyond is hidden in summer – lovely 💞Suzanne
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Wonderful haiku, Mark. The bare dark wood comes alive in your poem. 😊
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i really enjoyed your poem it says so much 💜
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This is truly lovely, Mark! ❤
Much love,
David
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