Not really feeling like spring today in Southern New England! Pretty good sized snowstorm passing through. But I liked the image that these kigo words gave me: Shallow Spring, bush warblers and returning cold.
I tried to work today’s weather in, but it couldn’t happen. The image I chose is one that I have been noticing for several weeks: flocks of small birds in bushes by the trail. They’re a fun and refreshing sight.
Shallow Spring invites
bush warblers; returning cold
can't diminish songs.
Thanks as always to #tankatuesday
Well done, Boz. I love the imagery.
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I love the kigo phrase “shallow spring,” it says so much and is so relatable.
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I think you nailed that balance!
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You completed the haiku with a perfect image. Love it, Boz!
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Boz, I like how you have explained your process. It makes the poem all the more precious.
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The lines hit the right note
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I like this imagery too! Shallow spring has been messing with us here in mid-Michigan too!
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