Shadorma Challenge #tankatuesday

The challenge this week is to write a Shadorma, which has a syllable count of 3-5-3-3-7-5. Along with this, the challenge includes random words that must be used in the text.

A smile

Sticks onto my lips

As the song

of new spring

Is made up of birds singing

The flutter of wings

You can join the challenge here.

And yes I’m saying smile has two syllables. I think it could be argued that it’s one, but I’m saying SMY – UL

Reverse Cinquain for #tankatuesday

Tall pines

More still than a seventh grader

Strong, firm, and evergreen

Subtle wind shift

Life map

This weeks challenge was to write about what you see through your window. I was in class when I read the prompt, so I decided to use my wonderfully large windows as an inspiration.

I don’t think I quite expressed the contrast between the stillness of the trees and the restlessness of the student, but that’s what I’m going for.

Join the challenge here.

Synonym Challenge on #tankstuesday

I was given two words that I can only use synonyms for. I wrote a cinquain to meet the syllable challenge.

Uncoil 

Buds spin open 

Tender verdant hue 

That deepens when emerald leaves 

Return 

Thanks to Colleen M Chesebro. You can find the challenge, and the two words at www.wordcraftpoetry.com.

It would be fun if you made a guess at the two words and left a comment!

Poetry Reading

Reading my poem “Garlic Press” for my radio interview with Victoria Onefrei. Link for the show will be coming as soon as I have it!

Garlic Press

For its mechanical ferocity 

Consider the garlic press:  

The most aggressive kitchen tool 

More violent than the tenderizer. 


Peel the transparent husk 

Push the shiny bulb 

Down into the cup 

Pressing its arched back 

Over the grid of holes 


Line up the plunger – 

Hinged silver block 

Created to crush – 

Grip the handles 

Squeeze  


Pressing the bulb into the screen 

Pushing past its initial resistance 

Until it breaks 


Garlic pulps through holes 

Splattering in shafts  

Splashing into the dish. 

That Look

There are those who say
"She saw right through me"
Is the worst thing to hear.

But her face 
Tells me she is seeing
Past me.

When you see in her eyes
you are fading
it is awful.
When you see that 
something else has started
It's worse.
It's over. 

Portrait of Lady Agnew of Lochnaw (1865-1932) by John Singer Sargent, Public domain, via Wikimedia Commons

The #tankatuesday challenge was to write a Ekphrastic poem about this painting. I found her look very intriguing, and the set of her eyes inspired this poem.