Thoughts evaporate Yielding to infinite breath. Inhale. Float home.
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Thoughts evaporate Yielding to infinite breath. Inhale. Float home.
Check out wordcraftpoetry.com if you want to participate in #tankatuesday
Boz Bozeman 
This is a lovely senryu, and pairs well with your freestyle poem from yesterday.
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Thanks! So next step is to make a comparison or discuss the relationship between the two?
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No, the idea is to write both pieces at one time. There is no need for discussion, because the juxtaposition between the two poems ususally speaks for itself. It’s gives you a way to write freestyle poetry with an added meaning from the syllabic form.
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Oh. Ok got it! Thanks for another fun challenge.
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It’s a pleasure. I’m glad you’re having fun!
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This is beautiful! Your last line felt calming!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Nice. I like how this ties into the other poem.
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