Thoughts evaporate
Yielding to infinite breath.
Inhale. Float home. 

8 thoughts on “Haiku for #Tankatuesday”

1. This is a lovely senryu, and pairs well with your freestyle poem from yesterday.

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   • Thanks! So next step is to make a comparison or discuss the relationship between the two?

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     • No, the idea is to write both pieces at one time. There is no need for discussion, because the juxtaposition between the two poems ususally speaks for itself. It’s gives you a way to write freestyle poetry with an added meaning from the syllabic form.

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     • Oh. Ok got it! Thanks for another fun challenge.

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     • It’s a pleasure. I’m glad you’re having fun!

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2. This is beautiful! Your last line felt calming!

   Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
   http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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3. Nice. I like how this ties into the other poem.

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