#Tankatuesday is quite a challenge this week. To celebrate Colleen M. Chesebro’s birthday, we are asked to write a poem with 65 syllables. We also get to name our poem type, and I’m calling mine a “Jinx” because it has 13 lines. Each line has five syllables, totaling 65. Believe me, that math was not easy for me.
Jinx Falling up the stairs. Step on the stair that Is not there. Find your Balance or fall down. Feel the flailing fear. Black cats, cracked mirrors. Walk under ladders. No thirteenth floor, no Button for thirteen in elevators We walk away from Our superstitions And we gain true strength.
Here is the link to the challenge!
This is so fun, Boz! I like the way this flowed. The Jinx is a hit!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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I did and I appreciate the time you took to create the poem.
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What a great title for your new form π
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Thank you!!
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I love the pace of your new poem, Boz. Bravo!
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Thanks!
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Your poem is great, Mark! I loved it!
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Thanks!!
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That was cool. I like the math, and how you broke it up, (5×5) + (5×5) + (3×5)
It looks great and I love the zinger of a message in the final stanza.
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Thanks! I tried to change up the focus at the end.
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Good name for the form. The last 3 lines felt like a moral to the story.
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Yeah that was definitely the intention!
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This is a fun one, Mark π
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Thanks!
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Oh! Bless that was my mum she had a superstition for every occasion, if we were not saluting magpies, or catching the first leaf of autumn we were waiting for someone to pick our dropped glove up or hiding our feet because our socks were inside out…..
Loved your poem
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Thank you! That’s a lot of superstitions, but they seem fun!
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Oh! That just a few there were many more!
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Great form. I like the name of the form. π
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I like the humor behind the name of the form, Mark, and I smiled through the whole poem!
Personally, I’ve never had superstitions π
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David
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