This week’s challenge asked us to write three tanka and use these “kigo phrases” at the beginning or middle-hinge line:
#1: “the first month with sleet”
#2: “late winter garden”
#3: “blanket by the fire”
Here is mine!
The first month with sleet Hike leaning into the wind Beard reducing sting A mask from the intense cold My head bows to Nature's strength The seeds we have not planted No growth drinks the waning sun Late winter garden A product of fantasy No farms no food then no feast Wind opens the door Icicle beard melts in warmth A blanket by the fire Wine glasses reflecting flames My warmth is doubled by her
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Great poems! I especially love the last tanka. The imagery is amazing, and this line is extraordinary: my warmth is doubled by her. 😊
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Thank you Gwen! Wonderful feedback 🙂
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Agreed!
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Love these images🍁
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Thanks!!
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Romance is alive!!
While I’ve not gone head first into sleet – I have walked into the diminishing winds of a hurricane… Like a cartoon, walking, leaning, pushing to get one step closer… 🍷 🔥
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Really nice, felt the cold, the hunger and the warmth and love of the return 💜💜
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Well done, Mark! I like how the tanka series progressed through time.
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Thank you!!
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You’re so welcome!
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The romance of the last couple of lines feel extra warm. A lovely set of poetry.
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Thank you!
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