For this challenge I used the Kigo list to almost entirely create my poem.
The sharpness of the stars is one of the joys of the season; the quality of darkness intensified by the contrast with pinpoint light.
Bright clear winter moon
Shining with cold and clear stars
Cold and clear frost gleams
As always I enjoy responding to tankstuesday challenges.
I wish I lived out of city lights to see that!
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It certainly sounds like a cold night, if a beautiful one!
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Cold and clear repetition does a good job of emphasizing its dominance on the scene. I wondered if winter would ever get here and it has with a vengeance. That said I’m relieved it’s here.
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Like Lisa, I like the reptition of the cold and clear kigo phrase. It really helps to emphasize the season and the feel of the season.
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Mark,
This haiku masterfully captures the essence of a bright winter night!
Nice!
~David
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I love when I’m able to see stars at night. Your poem is wonderful, Mark!
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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